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All writing books
involve buying into the author's philosophy, and this is especially true of
erotica writing guides (for instance, Lars Eighner's view of gay men's erotica
as the only gay literature that can't be co-opted to some mainstream agenda; or
Elizabeth Benedict's view that sex scenes are pivotal to all
novel-writing). Susie Bright's angle in How
to Read/Write a Dirty Story is to promote candid sex-positive writing -
with no distinction made between 'erotica' and 'porn' - that opposes
censorship, breaks taboos and represents all sexualities. It will have a
particular interest for writers sympatico with SB's background as editor of the
Herotica series and the lesbian magazine On our Backs. But
she mentions other genres - including the "manly" ones of SF, horror and crime
- and the book will interest anyone who wants to explore erotic fiction writing
... and the emphasis is on 'explore'. SB's starting point is the argument that
erotic writing springs primarily from people wanting "to articulate their
desires in a way that amazes themselves". But, if you are prepared to examine
and develop this internal reason for writing, she argues that the spinoff is
that it will have more power for others reading it.
The 291-page book has a wide-ranging brief, from the history of erotic
writing in America, via practical tips on writing and marketing, to a final
discussion of what erotic writing will do to your mindset, all interwoven with
autobiographical material showing how SB became (to her own surprise, we find)
a 'sex guru'. The appendix lists "every important erotic book that has
influenced SB's work", along with selected websites.
However, this book shouldn't be ghettoised as a guide for erotica
writers only. Obviously, much of the content is angled at sexual writing. For
instance, there's advice about understanding sexual response and the stream of
consciousness as orgasm approaches, specific warnings about 'operating
instructions' sex scenes and silly orgasmic sound effects, and help on avoiding
the burnout that comes of writing formulaic sex. But authenticity, empathy with
your characters, wide reading, strong characterisation, and proofreading
properly, are important whatever fiction genre you write. Furthermore, this
book encourages writers to expand their range by exploring different genres,
tackling taboo words and subjects, and trying out stylistically unconventional
language (in fact, to write modern fiction rather than the dated, constipated
style adopted by most newbie writers). The
marketing advice - "Editing It", "Publishing It" and "Selling It" - is
interesting for SB's personal account, but the bones of it will be familiar to
anyone who follows the how-to-write circuit. Is it really necessary to warn
people not to send unsolicited work to authors they admire? Yes, unfortunately;
many newcomers are still that crass. SB reports the pains of going to the
Market: finding an agent; the pros and cons of major publishers, small presses
and self-publishing; and fan clubs, book tours, performances and the review
circuit are there for completeness. Few of us, frankly, will progress that far;
SB's advice on what you need to cut it as a professional writer at various
expectations of income is depressing, but realistic.
Some of the market information and stylistic advice applies particularly
to the USA. Writers taking on paid 'mentoring' is a very American phenomenon.
And compared, for example, with the UK, the USA has a larger short story
market. UK erotic fiction publishers are in the main stuck in the 'porn per
page' model , with no interest in the literary and experimental, nor stories
about the "the homely, the deformed, the aged, the plain and the absurd" that
SB recomends as fair game for inclusion in erotic scenarios.
Otherwise, the advice is readily adaptable. The book is strongly
rooted in attacking the USA sexual ethos that SB describes: a nation "founded
on Puritan beliefs" with a history of "censorship, sexual chauvinism and
repression". But this is a common enough mindset, and the tactics SB describes,
for avoiding "erotica versus porn" semantic arguments and responding to hostile
critics who play the 'sex and violence' card, apply anywhere.
In summary, SB's take on erotica writing is that it works
simultaneously at different levels: while it's simply enjoyable for writer and
reader, it also has a serious function as a liberal and liberating force,
personally and politically. If this concept
strikes you as PC, over-politicized or too touchy-feely, you won't get much
from this book. (Some writers are happy to churn out work without a thought as
to its emotional authenticity, literary quality, or what it means to themselves
and their readers). But anyone open to the idea that their writing's
effectiveness can be improved by considering its personal and social purpose
will find How to Read/Write a Dirty Story inspiring and
thought-provoking.
Ray Girvan
Susie Bright's How to
Read/Write a Dirty Story is available as both paperbook or e-book form.
See www.susiebright.com for more
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